Is this sentence grammatically correct? If not, please correct it

Murderers who face the penalties for their crimes on earth I think will go to Heaven much sooner than those who get off lightly.

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    It’s a bit awkward as it is.  I don’t know how formal you want this sentence to be, but leaving your phrases intact, it’s more fluid rendered as such:

    I think that the murderers who face the penalties for their crimes on earth will go to Heaven much sooner than those who get off lightly.

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